Thursday, 15 September 2016

2016 calendar art

Description: for art this term we did Quilt art. It was based on and inspired by Eric Carle. We cut up our back grounds that we made. The we put it together to make some shapes. We had to do it with panekiretatanga.

Feedback: I like how is a mix amount background and texture. Juven
Feedforward:but I think you should of had an the same patter every circle. Juven

Evaluation: I think I could stay with one pattern next time I do this art.

Thursday, 8 September 2016

Writing portfolio post

Description: In writing we have been learning about simple sentences, adverbial phrases, complex sentences and compound sentences. We do writing every Tuesday, Thursday, Friday at 10:20. I'm in Ellys writing group.

Feedback: I like how you talked about what days we do writing.
Feedforward Next time you could talk about what are simple compound and complex sentences.

Evaluation: Next time I could look at other books to see how other authors write the sentence that I want.

Monday, 5 September 2016

Et reo portfolio post

Description: In et reo we have been doing whakatauki. A whakatauki is a saying in Maori that gives advice. Our whakatauki is "He aha to mea Nui o Te Ao? He Tangata, He Tangata, He Tangata."  This means that the most important thing in the world is people. We created a portrait of us to illustrate the whakatauki.  A lot of people did different characters.
Feedback: I like how you said it was Māori people's advice.
Feedforward: Next time you could say why Maoris think that.

Evaluation:I don't think I did very well beacause I only had one day to do my good copy.