Thursday, 25 June 2015

luke and Thomas's food chain

Description: In Troys scince group we have been making food webs. We have made the nz bush food web, a Marine food web, and we also made some art, after all this. Troy finally said that we could make are own food webs and is we wanted we could do them with a buddy ( JACKPOT ). so me and Thomas teamed up and decided to make a Grand Canyon food web here it is. 

Tuesday, 16 June 2015

Writing

WALT: Impact 

Success criteria: juicy verbs 

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Big idea: publish writing 
Here it is.  I look in shock I saw a pink hand slam! That guy hit me in the face. Boom I suddenly rocket to the ground. I swoosh up off the ground and get wacked back and frow. I hate being a hand ball.


Feedback/feedforowd: I like the way you have lots of ideas.shaiv
Maybe you can do a little bit better with your handwriting.shaiv 

Evaluation: I think I did well doing the plan but I need to write more.

Tuesday, 2 June 2015

Reading post

Description: We all have a reading goal to help our reading. They are comprehension and expand vocabulary. My goal is comprehension.

Big idea: From term 2 week 2 we did a tic tac toe activity and we have to do three tic tac toe's and to of them are must does and one of them is a can do. 

Succes criteria: in comprehension we did a text to text task. Text to text is when you are making connections with two texts. There is also a text to world and text to self. So text to world is when you use the text to make connections to the world. Text to self is when you make a connection with your self.
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Evaluation: I need to work on text to world.

Feedback feedford: i think that that game is fun because I played it so nice choice but maybe you could make it a bit more specific Tom