Monday, 18 August 2014

goal fish

WALT: set SMART goals
Task: set a learning goal, a behaviour goal and an at home goal. Create a goal fish to display you goals.

Success Criteria
I can read my goals
My goals are specific
My goals are measurable
My goals are important to me

Reflection Questions


I think
My learning partner thinks
I can read my 
goals
because i put them were i could read them.
 i cant really read them.
My goals are specific
because i can achive my goals.ty
They are really specific luke.
My goals are measurable
my goals are measurable.
They are really measurable.
My goals are important to me
because i can read them.
They must be REALLY important to you :)
You have chosen goals that are going to help you grow as a learner. If you plan maintenance early in the week and remain focused on your learning, you will complete all the must dos. Helping at home (without being asked) is always a great way to show responsibility!
Kerri

My fabulous trip

                                                        My fabulous trip

"Hurry up get in the car"! dad says, "I'm getting the iPad, oh and my head phones" I say, brom brom goes the engine we head off to Taupō. I put my head phones on and turn on the ipad. I watch a movie and play games. "Yay" I say, "we are going to Taupō" my brother says. "Is that a ufo on the back of the truck, why has the truck stopped", l say. The alien hops out of the  truck and the alien hops into the ufo. The ufo goes up and shoots at us dad pushes a button and we go up.We shoot the ufo down.

Photos of my Original Writing
WALT: write to inform

Success Criteria
  • Create a clear image in the readers mind
  • Have a clear message (big idea)
  • Powerful words (precise, clear)
  • Reread writing and check for impact
My thinking questions

I choose this piece to publish because i liked my writing.
I need to practise my ful stops. 
I am pleased about my writing because it makes sense.

My Published Writing
WALT: edit and publish our writing

Success Criteria
  • Use a font and colour that can be easily read
  • Must make sense
  • Correct spelling
  • Correct punctuation
  • Change at least 3 words to add impact for the reader
You have turned an idea from your writers notebook into a story. Your writing starts with direct speech, this is a clever hook and grabs the readers attention.
Remember to add some more details to your writing to make sure the message is clear for the reader. Perhaps you have described the UFO, what did it look like? what could you hear?
Kerri